The unspeakable

by melly xx   Nov 3, 2006


There tangled in my heart
too scared to even try
too afraid of the poison
that leaks into the air
every time you take a breath
my heart trembles
fumbles at a loss of words
the pain pierces through my skin
the words embedded in my heart
they can't escape
the 3 simple words
those words, eloquent with compassion
they cower in a corner
swallowed by darkness
a love unbearable to my heart
each minute, stings me with pain
each minute, left without the strength
to reveal the truth,
to release the agony
I've felt so long
to speak those unspeakable
3 words, 8 letters
each letter marked with passion and hope;
I love you
♥
© MLS

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  • 17 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Very nicely written, the flow was very good, however I felt the structure needs work, perhaps breaking it into stanzas would help. Overall great poem.

    Peace, Joe

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    Awh, wow hun. That was great. The details you put into this were amazing. The flow worked well as did all the emotion. Wow. Nicely done, you have talent! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by x.Athame.x

    Mm... very nice poem. Relatively simple, but portrays a lot of meaning. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    Maybe simplicity and the content attract me to read it..its a nice piece. Good job KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK