Unplanted Seed

by melly xx   Feb 8, 2007


Her heart entwined in thorns
her love suffocated by weeds
an innocent child unborn
an unplanted seed

Her hope destroyed by pain
her dreams fall to the floor
the fight to stay sane
the struggle to open the door

her eyes worn down from tears
her voice, broken cries of prayer
she trembles from her fears
she knows that nobody cares

her mind, beaten, crushed thoughts
her soul, so f**ked up inside
distant screams and a gunshot
there was no place left to hide

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  • 18 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Full of the deepest kind of pain. Tugs at your heatstrings. Good job!

  • 18 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    This is beautiful. I really enjoyed it, and I wouldn't know what to fix with it. The parallel structure had a good effect upon the poem.

    <3 5/5.

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridget

    Definitely 5/5!! i loved all the ideas used in that poem, and it had great feeling in it especially the last verse! absolutely terrific poem :)

    keep up the gud work
    take care,
    bridget

    p.s it wud be great if you could comment and rate back!..??

  • 18 years ago

    by Red Charm

    Good poem. I like it
    ~red

  • 18 years ago

    by firexdancer

    This is amazing, so beautiful

    distant screams and a gunshot
    there was no place left to hide

    i loVd it!
    luv gabriella

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