Okay! i loved it! and i have to say i am guessing it is a true emotion b/c your wrote it so beautifully! keep up the wonderful work!

~ashley~

I do not write a lot of poems that do not have a rhyme scheme, yet I can enjoy one that flows freely from the heart as this romantic poem seems to

beautiful way to end a poem

Thats a great poem alot of emotion i love poems like that keep up the good work im looking forward to reading other poems of yours :)

Awwwwww, can you write one about how much you love me :D lol o/j

Reeli nice poem mate, u got it spot on there.

Well done!

:) I liked it a lot! :D It's so sweet! lol

~~Spanish Willow Spirit

Aw. Such a cute poem, Joe.
It's excelent.
I gave a five.

Take care,
N-G-C-S.

Excellent. you really know how to describe love :) well done

Awww joe....thats so sweet,i didnt know you really felt that way about me:)haha jk that was really sweet though,if only every guy was like that and saw it with the same point of veiw you saw it...but unfortunately thats not gona happen hehe love you babe

I envy your love. The beauty of such a peice is that people can relate! Such a sensational experiance! 5/5

P.s how did you do do that server msg?

Great poem. But too lovey dovey for me Lol. Keep up the great lovey dovey work! : )

"For my love for you,
All I can say is I love you" perhaps the comma should be a point ( whatever it's called in english a "." because i think "All I can say is I love you " is a sentence at its own, as is the sentence before it "There is no easy explanation
For my love for you"
apart from that it flows from the heart ( altough i think "For this is...
The feeling of a tender affection" stops the flow a little bit)
apart from all that , I like the personal emotion towards love in it
pretty well done

I glance at your glistening eyes
As we make sweet love
And I smile just at the view of you
Laying there next to me

You make me so happy
And that is oh so true
You gave me that something
That I've been searching for

The lines above flowed well and had that hint of euforia, that captures the heart of the reader.

In the third stanza, you wrote of love then the last line seemed misplaced. Maybe if it read: As if we've never loved before.

the rest of the poem, seemed okay, you really put your heart and soul on the line.

You say you love me
And I know it's true
For this is...
The feeling of a tender affection

That I just can't explain
When I see you,
I know everything is ok
When I see you,

The ending of the forth stanza, was linked with the first line of the fifth stanza in a complete thought or sentence. They should have been together in the same stanza because it throws the rhythmn off and makes the repeating lines of "when I see you seem choppy and unneccessary.

I hope I'm not being too harsh, but you did ask for an honest opinion. Just remember, It is, after all, just an opinion.

Jeannie

This was a very sweet poem with a lot of affectionate feelings entwined in it..i thought the flow was a bit off and distracted me from the poem but otherwise it was very nice.

I love your poems so far, they happen to make me smile. I like the stanza:
Your soft tender lips
Up against mine
Holding each other close
As if we've never loved at all

It gave me goosebumps.

Awesome Job!
5/5

Awh, that was very sweet Joe. The flow was good as the rhymes worked well. The descriptions created good imagery yet were still short and simple. In the last two stanzas I dont like how you kind of keep the idea running. If you understand what I mean. Like you say "When I see you" that isn't the end of the idea.. It continues onto the next stanza. I didn't like this as I like each stanza to have its own idea but that is just me. Nicely done 5/5

I gave you a 4, but you really deserve closer to a 4.3 or 4.5... it was a nice poem, and i liked the idea... the flow was a little off though. I'm fine with the no rhyme scheme thing... i do that all the time, sometimes it's just easier to write them that way. nice job though, and keep up the good work, i'll check out the others!

I liked the poem, but i gave it a 4... it really deserves more of a 4.3 or 4.5, but of course they don't have those,,, you just needed to work on the flow... that's all, nice job

Aww this poem was so beautifuLLL u have a great way with words, very descriptive and emotional... keep it up

I am speechless.
Your [[Amazing]]

Great really from the heart xxx