Tears

by Sarahs death angel   Nov 6, 2006


My tears are words
My heart can't speak
My thoughts and uncertainties
They are the symbols that I am weak

They softly fall
And pierce through my heart
They glisten beautifully
But rip me apart

They sting my heart
They rip it to shreds
The break and shatter it
But this is my bed

I must lie in what I created
I must try to be strong
For this is my life
Where everything goes wrong.

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  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Your rhythm's a little off because of the differences in syllables line to line, but overall i really did enjoy this poem. It was very understandable, very realistic, and very sad.
    Loved this stanza...
    They softly fall
    And pierce through my heart
    They glisten beautifully
    But rip me apart

    Enjoyed!
    Charisma*

  • 17 years ago

    by Ney ney

    Jus knw i always here 4 u sez... i love it... love you.. mwah

  • 17 years ago

    by Ney ney

    Wow sez... really really gud.. i love it....

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