Through The Wind And Rain

by Arcane Blondie   Nov 8, 2006


The bitter wind whipped harshly against her gentle face,
Making her body shake, lips quiver,
She stared down the path she walked, but everything was blurry,
Raising her hands she wiped the rain off her face,
The pellets of water stung her cold body, numbing it even more,
No lights shined upon the street to guide her through the night,
No living things were present to confirm her existence,
Her legs weak, breath slow, she kept walking,
Walked through her pain, to live her life.

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  • 17 years ago

    by xxEvilAngelxx

    Inspirational and well written. It is straight and too the point, a good poet uses less words to express the meaning- you've done that. 5*

    Love.

  • 17 years ago

    by sweetiepie18

    Outstanding!

  • 17 years ago

    by allison

    Good Job! You your Wording and
    FLow
    Veryy Nice.

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    Again
    Awesome Vocabulary! You describe things so well it makes me feel as if I am there. You are amazing! I usually choose which parts I love the best, but here I cannot choose!

    Excellent
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by linderrrxo

    I really lie this one it is very good 5/5

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