What I could do

by Anonymous Angel   Nov 8, 2006


Do you know?
that, when I think of you,
my feelings grow,
what should I do?

I could tell you,
but would you laugh at me?
afraid of rejection,
now I finally took some action.

you could easily turn me down,
and break my simple little heart,
I could have made my self look like a clown,
in front off you.

you could accept my feelings,
and make me happy,
or turn me down,
and make me feel crappy.

or I don't tell,
and just hide it,
so no one would see,
what you mean to me!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Hidden Feelings within these Words

    I liked this poem, I think there are a few things that should be reworded, so that it would flow a little better, but all in all. Good job. =)
    -Ally

  • 18 years ago

    by Loveneverwantedmeღ

    Thanks your an awsome writer i love this poem =]

  • 18 years ago

    by *~.:LoVeLy:.~*

    This is a really good poem I like it a lot =]. Oh and thanx 4 the comment on my poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Emma Brown

    Wow, thank you very much for your comment on my poem. Have you any ideas what I could change the line would you shoot me with this gun to because I only wrote that as it's the only thing I could think of lol ... 5/5. Brilliant poem, thank you once again =) xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Robin

    Good poem. Never let the fear of striking out keep u from playin the game :)

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