Comments : Choking in the Butterfly World

  • 17 years ago

    by Espoirfailed

    What an excellent poem. full of emotion that so many ppl can relate to, i like how u tell it like it is but still use poetic language

  • 17 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    Everybody struggles at times and things don't just get better over night they take time but eventually it will all work out. This is a fantastic poem with so much meaning great job 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    The imagery...wow...
    You have a lot of talent..
    I thought the wording was brilliant and the whole piece flowed very well.

  • 17 years ago

    by Laybelled with a name

    I thought it said 'cooking' in a butterfly world. Didn't know what was going on! Good poem though...

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni

    I thought that this was different from most poems & that's what made me like it. The words you used were great. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashley Ann

    Not one of my favs. it was about a 4/5 I love the title though because it is unique.. the title is just as important as the poem! ;) keep up the good work..

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    I really found this poem to be creative and the imagery was just amazing, this poem was full of emotion im sure alot of people can relate to this. Well done ~mel

  • 11 years ago

    by Adelle

    This is entirely unique I love the journey that this poem takes you thought. A perfect ending you ate very talented.