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by sarah Nov 10, 2006 category : Sadness, depression / other
Perfect life, Perfect home, Perfect heart. Perfect smile. Perfect person. Such a perfect lie.
by Jenni
If this poem would have had more descriptions and was a little longer i probably would have enjoyed it more, it was a good poem, but you should try to improve on the length.
by Gem
Short but sweet and i loved the totally unexpected ending. 5/5 *Gem*
