Open our Eyes Witness the Beauty

by Anonymous   Nov 13, 2006


Open our Eyes Witness The Beauty: Josh Shelley

Lay in your bed or lay outside,
It's all the same inside you're mind,
All we want is to get out,
Get out of life and live without,
Rules or pain, life's a game,
Live without labels and names,
Timeless sign, this is our duty,
Open our eyes witness the beauty,
Smile laugh hard and soft,
Drivin' 'round till we get lost,
Blast the music and sing along,
So much fun but the notes are wrong,
Lay in the sand and dig up pits,
Bury ourselves up to our chins,
What to do next we're still disputing,
Open our eyes witness the beauty,
Make out in an elevator,
Stay out late we're friends forever,
Fakin' sick and playin' hookey,
Walkin' 'round the whole damn city,
Sneak out at night and watch a movie,
Open our eyes witness the beauty,
With two great friends it's so amusing,
Open our eyes witness the beauty.

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  • 12 years ago

    by BlueJay

    My gosh this poem is amazing. Your voice is clear and strong. there is emotion that is so well conveyed, and there are some wonderful uses of imagery. 5/5 from me because i love this and cant find a single negative thing about it

  • 16 years ago

    by Allison

    Wow, I could really relate to this poem. It flowed nicely and I loved your use of repetition, it fit the style you wrote in. Keep up the good work. ^^ *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by FridusBlueheaven

    I love this one. 5/5 from me!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    Wow...I loved this poem! It's everything I've always wanted to write about. It's that emotion that everyone feels when there having a good time. I loved it. I just wanted to let you know I'm adding it to my favorite poems.
    5/5
    Kaila

  • 16 years ago

    by Anonymous Angel

    Hey,
    A nice poem, normally i don't like poems about life but this one is okay, good flow and rhyming, I enjoyed reading it, keep up the good work!
    kisses stephanie

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