Lustful Eyes

by AnnMarie   Nov 14, 2006


Lustful eyes scan the night
Thy face fall upon me
I have the one I love,
though declining is still a fight.

Lustful eyes scan the night.
While the shameless heart targets me
Eyes brazenly emerged determined to rule
Only my lovers face shall I see.

Lustful eyes scan the night.
Thy tender innocence on display,
Jealous hearts about to break,
as it's only my lovers name I shall say.

Lustful eyes scan the night,
dancing indisputably with thy other half
develish glints hoplessly departed
as our romance goes on uncharted.

THIS poem is a parquette! The first line always stays the same, It goes abca abcb acbc abcc

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  • 17 years ago

    by BrixGoesxRawr

    Wow, Hun. This was so amazing. I've never heard of this style.. But i'm deffinitley going to have to try it. It flowed so well & the choice of words were excellent. The repitition of that line.. Really brought the poem together, you couldn't have chose better words for that. :]

    Lustful eyes scan the night.
    Thy tender innocence on display,
    Jealous hearts about to break,
    as it's only my lovers name I shall say.

    ^ Deffinitley my favorite stanza.. So beatuiful. The imagery in this poem is amazing.

    Beautifully penned, babe.

    Bri [x]

  • 17 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    I didn't know anything about that style but i liked it,the flow and wording were great but one thing confused me.what is 'thy' in the first stanza second line
    Other than that well done
    Keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by LithiumSacrifice

    Wow. very very nicely done. good job you! yes, the "lustful eyes scan the night" is quite eye catching. my fav stanza would have to be "Lustful eyes scan the night.
    Thy tender innocence on display,
    Jealous hearts about to break,
    as it's only my lovers name I shall say"

    well done. =]

  • 17 years ago

    by firexdancer

    That was beautiful, it flowed together perfectly, it really is just like a picture
    "Lustful eyes scan the night.
    Thy tender innocence on display,
    Jealous hearts about to break,
    as it's only my lovers name I shall say"
    it was so sweet,
    beautiful

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    I am not anyone to know the forms of poetry. I loved this it was really beautiful! Great job! Take Care Cindy

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