Time

by Court   Nov 14, 2006


Time finds you.
It creates you, molds you.
It beats you, and it stains you.
It ruins what you had, and gives you nothing in return.
Time changes you, re-models you.
It mocks you, irritates you.
It angers you, depresses you.
Time finds you, and loses you.
It always wins, and you always lose.
It is always in control, you just have to go with what it does.
Time attacks you, yet completes you.
And when it's finished with you, it throws you out.
In return, you must waiste nothing.
Remember every tear, each insult, each burst of laughter.
Tattoo it on the inside of your mind.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    This peom is really great! It has a nice flow, good vocab usage, and i was hooked form the first line. One tip for improvement is that your punctuation. You did use it but i htought you should of used enjambment and stuff. Still a good read, keep it up! xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    This peom is really great! It has a nice flow, good vocab usage, and i was hooked form the first line. One tip for improvement is that your punctuation. You did use it but i htought you should of used enjambment and stuff. Still a good read, keep it up! xx

  • 17 years ago

    by tinna

    Im adding u on my fav list after reading this one, tallent is all i can say about ur poems!