Rush of Hearts {Attempted Parquette}

by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex   Nov 15, 2006


This was supposed to be a Parquette...But then I realized I did something wrong and it can't be fixed or the whole poem would sound bad. Thus, I give you Rush of Hearts in attempted Parquette form...
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Rush of hearts forever more,
Delicate prayers will I to sin,
Simple love you will confess,
Exotic motives deep in core.
Rush of hearts forever more,
Feelings take over deep within,
Touch of gentle to the breast,
Soul with malice examine.
Rush of hearts forever more
Such a love, such a mess,
Never let go of this sin,
Love so simple is a bless.
Rush of hearts forever more,
Smile a soul with a grin,
Open your heart to test,
What your heart can confess.
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  • 17 years ago

    by SCARECROW

    "Simple love you will confess,
    Exotic motives deep in core."
    Usually, I do not like to read love poems, I am the kind to often read the more dark twisted side of poetry, but this definetely caught my eye. It is, just like the rest of your work, utterly fantastic, and I am adding you to my list of favourites. 5 from me. ^.^

  • 17 years ago

    by Anonymous

    That was pretty sweet.
    I don't know how Parquette's go, so I can't really give you anything but... A FIVE.