Individual

by ForeverGoneInYourEyes   Nov 15, 2006


A girl walks by
A guy turns his head
A car hits the girl
The guy is heart struck

He wishes that it was him
That he would have said something
A simple hello would have done
But it's to late

We all know things happen for a reason
Its hard to follow when society is dark
Dark and unnegated with the fact
That everyone has their place

That everyone should be happy
That life isn't just about you
Cause being selfish
Isn't what its about

Society is this dark place though
So don't be a part of it
Be an individual
Be like no one

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  • 17 years ago

    by AnnMarie

    Great poem! Really different(which is good) very strong feeling, flow was ify, but overall a great write!
    -AnnMarie

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Interesting poem here. I loved it, especially the message put behind it. Yeah and I too really liked how you managed to start it off. 5/5 Keep it up!

    Stephanie

  • 17 years ago

    by emmerz

    I agree!!!! i like how it began with a story and slowly formed into a... message. grrrreat job!!

    Emily

  • 17 years ago

    by Kristina

    Wow such a true poem. the first stanza brought tears to me eyes! excellent job writing this! 5/5

    ~Kristina

  • 17 years ago

    by Jody

    I support the principle of being an individual...not to be corrupted by the evil within society. That's.. REAL!

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