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by lalalailoveyou   Nov 15, 2006


Tears fall on the interior
But you'll never see her cry
She keeps her pain locked deep inside
From every little lie
Her heart lets out such deadly screams
Piercing through the silence
She no longer feels her scars
Numb from all the violence
She looks everywhere for comfort
But even home is out of place
Nobody, anywhere
To dry the tears behind her face
How could a simple lie
Inspire a wound so deep
That the sharp pain pierces
In the dead of night as she sleeps
Crying so often
To create a sea of lonely
Why did her dream Love
Leave her so lonely
She cant seem to find a way out
Henceforth echoes a mighty shout
Cutting through the air
As she stares at the flames
Over and over again she attempts
To figure out who to blame.

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  • 16 years ago

    by 0oAshleyo0

    This is really really good!
    5/5 no question!
    you described the instance that everyone goes through when their heart is broken... and in only a way that someone whos been there could!
    great job.... sad... but great
    <3
    XxAshleyxX

  • 16 years ago

    by XxxxSoManyStitchesxxxX

    I wonder who's thE gUrL.,.,
    i feLt LoneLy for her.,.,
    nice.,.,
    keEp up thE LovELy w0rk!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Curing the Comon Cliche

    Its really good. i usually hate wen ppl compare tears to lakes, oceans, rivers. but this was really good. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Curing the Comon Cliche

    Its really good. i usually hate wen ppl compare tears to lakes, oceans, rivers. but this was really good. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Angel

    Wow!!!! fantastic poem!!! really loved it!