In Each Others Eyes

by BeautifulxMess   Nov 17, 2006


Hearts will join in one.
Tonight I won't forget.
I found all of you.
The night was young.

I first saw your face.
It was an angel.
Caught in your ecstasy.
My heart sunk into me.

My eyes melted in yours.
Lost into them.
A maze to go through.
But at the end;
Something Great.

Or falling into a hole.
Bottomless; uncanny.
Unknown of whats below.
Searching for answers.

Is it love?
Or innocent crush.
A feeling of lust.
Or nothing at all?

Found out now.
I'm in your arms.
I'll always be there.
Safe, and wanted.

I found you that night.
Under the silver ball.
Every one danced around.
We looked forever
...........In Each Others Eyes.

*OK well I tried something new a different technique of writing I hope you like it.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Teria

    I loved the whole entire poem, EXCEPT one line. Lol
    "The night was young."
    Didn't seem to fit in at first, I realized towards the end it did. I think it should have been placed lower in the poem.

    Other than that this was an amazing poem.
    Hunni, you have talent!!
    Keep up the great work. :]

    God Bless. :]