Suicide

by Dana   Nov 17, 2006


My mind is troubled
there's something I have to hide
it's something very tragic
I'm contemplating suicide
no one knows I'm doing it
and no one knows I feel this way
no one ever asks me what's wrong
and no one asks if I'm OK
the answer is very simple
everything keeps going wrong
my life is like a book of phrases
patched into a very sad song
everyone thinks I'm happy
they don't know how much I cry
and the worst thing about it is
they won't even get to say goodbye
my mind is very blank
there's nothing else to hide
something very tragic has happened
I succeeded in suicide

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  • 17 years ago

    by brenda bear

    I love this poem! It describes how I feel every waking moment of my life. People just dont understand how it feels to want to die, I mean really want it. Ive tried suicide 3 tims and something always seems to go wrong maybe I just donnt do it write or maybe "God" wants me to live, I dont know but your poem is exactly what I needed.thanks.

  • 17 years ago

    by slitxthroat

    Aww this is coool

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashes

    Wow....this poem describes my feelings..well..i used to have them. i still want to leave this world sometimes of course...i hope you dont feel this way anymore.

  • 17 years ago

    by brittany

    Do you rlly feel tht way ???? i hope you dont! happy faces lol

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