Little Lost Girl
by nobody truly knows me Nov 17, 2006
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17 years ago
by ŘÅÇĦ♥
I like how you can make a poem and not push ryhming words. And your so desriptive it's like your there.
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17 years ago
by john graver
This is a very good poem. The emotion really comes through
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17 years ago
Thnx for the comment:) i loved this poem. it was really descriptive and good. keep up the great work:) 5/5
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17 years ago
by Cindy
You have such a talent for writing! Great poem. I enjoy reading your work.
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17 years ago
by Christie
Excellent poem. =D again, u've conveyed so many more words and emotions than what is actually written. =)
in this line:
"The girl gives a sigh"
u should replace 'the girl' with 'she'. just to make the flow better.
just my opinion. =) tho thats the only thing even slightly wrong with the whole thing, 5/5
xxx
