Fallen in Love .

by BrokenREALiTy   Nov 17, 2006


Please don't hold her like that,
At least not in front of me.
Stop telling me how you love her,
And that you two are meant to be.

I'm glad that your smiling,
And that you found someone to love.
But I just can't stand the fact,
That she's the one you're thinking of.

Please don't kiss her like that,
At least not when I'm there.
Stop telling me about her,
'Cause I honestly don't care.

I really am happy for you,
But it just hurts so much to look.
When I realized how I felt,
My whole world shook.

Please don't state that you love her,
I don't wanna hear what you say.
Stop telling me it's forever,
Making me jealous everyday.

I'm yelling to you, "Congratulations,"
You've found that special someone.
I thought I'd found mine,
But your heart's already been won.

Please don't look at her like that,
Can't stand the love in your eyes.
Stop telling me how you feel,
I don't wanna keep telling you lies.

I'm always trying to look happy,
And you ask me if I'm okay.
Of course I gotta lie to you,
'Cause what else would I say?

So please don't love her,
I know it's greedy of me.
But I've fallen in love with you,
Can't you see?
[c] 2O06 Mindy Huang

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Awwwwh.
    This was sad but also sweet at the same time, because your love was there for everyone to see.
    I really enjoyed this, I think you did a good job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie

    That's sad.
    Something I can relate to. I use to love a guy but he was in love with someone else and it broke my heart in the end and I'm still picking up the pieces.
    Wonderful flow and great emotions portrayed in this one! 5/5

    Stephanie

  • 17 years ago

    by Sarah

    Omg i love all your work your so good, i wish i was like u

  • 17 years ago

    by Jackie Marie

    Good job. The ending was a little rocky but it was good overall. It made me sad. I have been in that situation before and I hated it. Good luck and nice job. =]

    >black&&blue

  • 17 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    That's very sad. Almost all of my friends are going through the same thing. Hope you'll feel better.

    *You may want to recheck your spelling, some words need a '.