Modesty can suck my masculinity.

by deeesem   Nov 18, 2006


Why compete if you cant tell everone about your feat?
For every accomplishment,
I keep the reciept.

If you can back it up,
It aint cocky at all,
And I'm telling you all,
I'll still be standing tall...
After you fall.

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  • 17 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    True - if you can, you should, and I can see you have.
    Short but to the point, it wasn't a bad poem, but not the best I've read either, sorry if that sounds blunt/harsh. I just honestly found the rhymes to be cheesy/forced.

  • 17 years ago

    by Miss Pipp

    Ha Ha that was really strange and I really agreed with it. It was a bit short and I think there could have been more sortof.. well anyways keep writing =]
    Pip xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by N M Lambert

    Unusual poem but it really works!! good job x

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