You Are My Sun

by Brittany C   Nov 23, 2006


Everything seems bright when you are by my side,
When you hold my hand I feel safe,
And when you hug me I feel loved,
Like no other,
When I am with you, you are all I see,
When we are apart I think about you,
And the future we will build together,

I love you,
You are the sun in the blue sky,
And the stars on a beautiful night,
We may see things differently,
But in the end we learn to give and take,

I'm sorry if I ever hurt you,
You have never up set me on purpose,
You are always the first to say sorry,
It still amazes me that we have never had a fight,

I'm sorry if I seem to push you,
I really don't mean to,
I will try not to,
For when we are apart,
My days turn gray and my nights turn black.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    That was well written, a few mistakes, but no big deal. Very specail , and extremely loving.

  • 17 years ago

    by Alesia

    I can totally relate to this poem! It's so beautiful, and has a the look of a great song! I'm just totally in love with this one! Amazing work!

    Alesia

  • 17 years ago

    by Melissa

    Good poem.b

  • 17 years ago

    by donna

    This poem is really sweet.. Only a slight error in the first stanza with the word 'fill' it should be 'feel'.. other than that very well done 5/5 xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Aww. That was a very special and loving poem to read! :) Made me smile. You had a good flow and an excellent choice of wording. You've got a lot of talent as a writer, keep it up! 5/5

    Stephanie