Ultimate selection of words but i am confused with the footnote & i hope its not what i am understanding

all the best and take care

Amazing poem! Just incredible. loved the last stanza!
Charisma*

Another lovely poem ,but please don't let it be your last ,forgive me if I have just misunderstood ,don't give up what you truely are very good at.

A lovely write Shadow!!!

Hey u! i l0ve reading ur w0rk you betta not b leaving!!! i liked this poem another heartfelt piece. great use of words keep em coming. xx

Oh geez, very nice. Loved it. seriously one of the best I've read on this site... ever. 5/5

Take care.

Like all of your work this is another great write, so sad and moving,you make the reader feel your pain.wonderful.

Aww! i love your poetry.

Awwww. That was such a beautiful poem! The wording and flow was amazing. You really ended your last poem a magnificent peice of writing. Well done. 5/5 God Bless

~*Tay*~

You always have a way to touch so many hearts. Your writes always leave a trace of what true love really is. This is a beautiful piece Bert. Why are you leaving the site? The readers long to read your poems, dont stop writing.

Best Wishes
Michelle

It was great..5/5

That's an amazing poem... I know exactly how you feel... You should be proud of that, and don't give up... I know it's easy but try not to... There are people in the world who feel like you do too... -x-

!!! that poem was very nice and I enjoyed reading it
Its poems like these that make me happy I happened to come upon them
Great job and keep writing porfavor (please, haha)

If you could please read/rate my poem Classic Love Song, I appreciate it
I return the favor if you comment back

I always love your poems...It is really heart-warming,touching and also poignant...Write more pls...

Very touching and well-done.....
"flew swift as swallows fleeing...".........very nice.

Beautiful, I hope that the footnote is not what I percieve it to be. I hope that you continue writing, for if you were to not it would be an unimaginable waste of talent. Best wishes. 5/5

Beautiful!
But then, tomrrow never comes
I lie here, bereft and grieving
With just the ashes of our love
Cold comfort, born of grieving.
These lines really touched my heart.

Great as usual

The flow throughout this piece was smooth and your word choice great. Very descriptive, I found it to hold vivd emotions which were absolutely stunning. All I can say to this piece is beautiful. Truely heartfelt. Well done keep up the good work~mel