God I need your help

by Brook   Nov 25, 2006


God i need your help
i don't know what to do
Everythings fallling around me
I know you see it too.

I can't do this alone
Can't you see me bleeding?
I'm shaking so hard
Crying and screaming

Help me now
i don't know if i can do this
Too big a decision
And i don't wanna miss.

Help me God..
I'm barely holding on
Hold me now..
I'm gone.

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  • 17 years ago

    by X2892

    Wow this was deep, n god doesn't always help, he just watches us

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Oh wow...this was so sad, yet so beautifully written.
    I really enjoyed this.

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    You have a amazing talent for someome your age. Keep writing . Excellent job on your poem. Take care.

  • 17 years ago

    by XxFallenxFromxGracexX

    Great poem!! flows very smoothly and is filled with lots of emotion!!
    well done!!!!
    5/5
    Luv FallenxFromxGrace

  • 17 years ago

    by Kristina

    People have downvoted my lyrics "Hold On, Move Along" so I have deleted it and reposted it can you please leave your comment on it again and voted =]
    this is what you said

    Awesome =] you're a really good writer. I wish i could write song lyrics! this is amaaazing. It really shows your love for your friends =]

    thank you

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