Babe, Don't Tell {Double Lanturne}

by aDORKable x3   Nov 25, 2006


.......Babe,
......I Have
...This Secret
.I Swore I Would
........Keep

........Babe,
......Don't Tell
.....But I Think
....That I Am In
.........Love

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A Lanturne is a Japanese form of writing with the syllable flow 1.2.3.4.1.

It forms the shape of a Japanese lanturne.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I loved this, I thought it was beautifully written and I loved the words you used, they really got me in the heart.

  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    These are always awesome poems. Once again you can guess what you've got. 5/5! Great Job! God Bless

    ~*Tay*~

  • 17 years ago

    by Bryan

    This is a very good lanturne and deserves to be a 5!!! keep it up!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by donna

    Aww a very sweet double lanturne Hun.. Very nicely written.. well done 5/5 xx

  • 17 years ago

    by The Teddy Bear

    Baby i like this is it true lol i
    i Heart my puppy dog

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