Remedy of My Pain [Kyrielle]

by BeautifulxMess   Nov 26, 2006


As I look into your green eyes,
I see a fire burning into my veins.
You've ensnared my love I hold,
You're the remedy of my pain.

I can't keep away from you at all;
I'm linked to you with a chain.
You hold me close with your might,
You're the remedy of my pain.

I can cry and default my life,
but you'll clear up the stormy rain.
I'll never let go of your hand,
You're the remedy of my pain.

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  • 17 years ago

    by *Isolde*

    Wow that was a lovely poem. I like the way you wrote it....5/5 keep it up.

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Very good poem. Has a great flow to it. keep up the good work.5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Great poem, you have showed a great poetry style in this poem, keep it up. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by вℓєє∂ιиg.тєαяѕ ♥

    Awhh, that was soo sweet hunn. The flow was good as were the rhymes. The descriptions worked well and the vocabulary was great. I loved how you repeated the last line. Did you know this is a Kyrielle? Lol, just wondering. 5/5

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