My broken heart and soul

by Anonymous Angel   Nov 26, 2006


Pain in my heart,
you're the cause,
of my pain and sorrow,
I'm wishing there is no tomorrow.

I wish I could die,
feel no more pain,
no more thinking,
about what you did.

how I loved you,
and you would say I love you too,
at first I didn't think that you would hit me,
I just didn't want to see.

the abuse kept going on,
there was no stop,
you would say I'm sorry,
after every time,

my friends told me,
it's better for you to be free,
just leave him and let him be,
but I didn't want to believe.

now I regret that I didn't listen,
I finally left him,
but everything has his price,
now I'm broken in my heart and soul.

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I wrote this after I read a story about a girl that was abused by her boyfriend..

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  • 16 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I liked it, but the flo wasnt perfect, i thought it could have flowed better but i liked the story behind it, the imagery was good.
    well done 4/5

  • 17 years ago

    by tinna

    I have just decided this is my fav of ur's, it really hits home at the moment..

  • 17 years ago

    by tinna

    Inspiring.. thanx for commenting on my poem, id like u to read some more if u have time..

  • 17 years ago

    by Crimson Moon

    Beautiful poem ;) 5 for this one

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    by KellynGailen

    I like this poem a lot and gave it a 5/5. Thanks for commenting me on my poem. My email is GRD5994@aol.com, in case you ever want to talk.