Another day in hell

by Mark   Nov 27, 2006


My world consists of lies
friends self centered and egoistic
life has turned upside down
I am only being realistic

the time passes like seconds
no time to bloom
living in another's footsteps
Another day of eternal Doom

crying out loud won't ever help
people just passing by
my tears dried out
looking forward to the day I will die

I am too scared
with the gun in my hands
shaking outrageous
on the floor it lands

no way out of this hell hole
places the gun on my shelf
I am trapped in a body
inside it I am only a shadow of myself

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  • 18 years ago

    by The Queen of Spades

    I really enjoyed this poem, its darkness is very real and open. I especially love the line "inside it I am only a shadow of myself". beautiful way to end your piece! 5/5

    ~jas~

  • 18 years ago

    by Lindsay

    I looooove this one. Its really great!!!
    ~Lindsay

  • 19 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    Comment #1:
    After I read that all I could say is wow! I mean so many people write these kinds of poems and then they kill themselves and then they talk about being dead. But this was like leaving hell while still being there. I hope that made some kind of sense, lol. Anyways, congrats on placing and thanks for entering I really liked it!
    ~Midnight Sun

  • 19 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Strong....a very strong poem.
    You put a lot of emotion into this one and it made it an amazing poem at whole.

    Another day of eternal Doom

    ^ My favorite line. I don't know why but it just stuck out at me a lot. =]
    Wonderful job overall, keep it up! 5/5

    Stephanie

  • 19 years ago

    by AmberAngelEyes

    Hey i like this one

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