You + Her = Nothing of Me

by sweet_rebellion   Nov 28, 2006


Just being in your presence
means the world to me
your sweet and caring attitude
sets all of my pain free

I wish I had somebody
to love me like you love her
sometimes I am so jealous
sometims I'm just not sure

you stare into her eyes
and gaze so longingly
my heart is ripped out from my chest
as I'm wishing she was me

you never even notice
the way I long for you
I treasure every move you make
and everything you do

you plus her,
equals nothing of me
but being in your presence
sets all of my pain free

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  • 16 years ago

    by carolina munoz

    Wow i love this poem it is really pretty this is almost the way i feel keep it up.

  • 16 years ago

    by lexi

    I totally know how u feel. love it

  • 16 years ago

    by paul alexander

    Oh god i know how you feel i love this poem i love it a lot

  • 16 years ago

    by Emma

    I'm not crazy about the last line, but the rest of it's brilliant. I fell in love with the lines 'I treasure every move you make and everything you do'. That stanza was perfectly put together.

  • 17 years ago

    by Indigo Touch

    Really beautiuful poem. and thanks for commentin on mine. if u eva wanna talk feel free to email me. and write more soon, you owe it to the world! lol
    xxx

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