Love me

by brianna   Nov 30, 2006


No higher than the floor
stepped on and crumbled
how should i feel
i dont know if he loves me

oh but i know so well
he still loves her
he talks about her all the time
what can i do for him to see me

see that i am beautiful and great
and i have a loving heart
and my mom and dad are proud
and i am more than he thinks

let him love me
the way i love him

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  • 16 years ago

    by Tim Mauntler

    Nice, is this one about stephen too? I liked it... Like the first person to write a comment said: great flow, but i wish you would have made it longer. Of course... I can't talk since mine are short too, lol

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Awww poor thing I know what it's like to have the person you like like someone else lol sryy for all the likes if that makes any sence at all

  • 17 years ago

    by Lore

    Wow the flow in that poem was amazing and I loved the topic. I know exactly how that feels to watch the one you love, love someone else. In my case it was my best friend. But all I have to say is never give up. He realized that he cared for me and he was missing the greatest thing that was right in front of him. Sadly my story didn't have the greatest ending due to the fact that as soon as he figured that out and we were going to be together his mother shipped him off to live with his father in Idaho, haven't seen him since.

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