Catch 22.

by Krzysztof J   Dec 1, 2006


I'm bleeding as i write this,
But you cant see my blood,
In truth I'm really dying,
But when you seem me I'm alive.

Its been so bloody long,
Since i felt a warm hug too,
I feel so damn alone,
My angel is gone too.

I wonder why i write this,
Why i pour my feeling out?
Should i just be quiet,
And eventually turn to dust.

Girls do winge and moan,
That guys do cheat and lie,
That they don't respect them,
They use them and say goodbye.

Have you ever noticed,
Its a catch twenty two,
That if you are a decent guy,
You always get riped in two.

You give them what they want,
You treat them very nice,
With all the respect they deserver,
With love in your eyes.

I'm really sick and tired,
Of hearing all these lies,
That decent guys don't exist,
When you cast us aside.

So tell me little girl,
Whats a guy to do?
For when we give souls and hearts,
Its never enough for you!

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  • 17 years ago

    by kiara

    The words of truth, this is exactly what happens in life lol
    i luvd it
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "I'm really sick and tired,
    Of hearing all these lies,
    That decent guys don't exist,
    When you cast us aside."

    So true and it breaks my heart to realise it.
    So many guys hit, cheat, lie... and thise just gives the decent loving guys a bad name.
    And since girls always seem to go for the horrible ones anyway for the 'excitment' the decent ones adapt to that way....
    It's so sad =(
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by Kelly

    Vey heartfel and sad. Well love wouldnt be such a wonderful thing if everyone has not been burned by it once in a while. Very emotional and heartfelt write. Amazing, take care.

    Kelly
    xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Jemma

    This is a really good write.

    'Have you ever noticed,
    Its a catch twenty two,
    That if you are a decent guy,
    You always get riped in two.'

    is a really good verse. I think everyone really wants the same thing but are scared of not reaching it.

    Thank you for you comments. they are much appreciated.

    Jemma

  • 17 years ago

    by Just Me

    Sweetie. There are decent guys... but there are very mean guys. Its the same with girls. There are sweet girls who couldn't hurt a fly... and there are brats. Sadly its the way of the world. Trust me you'll find your girl. I love you. and Your welcome... take my hand I promise we'll make it.

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