Once

I relate to the poem because It was exactly like that with me and this girl, but now we are the best of friends. [5\5]

How very sad, to want to die at your age for love...I do understand, though..some people can touch us in such a way, we feel we will never love that way again.
You did a good job on expressing your emotions:)

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid

The flow was off a little, but nothing major. The word usage was really good and this piece had a lot of emotion to it. I loved reading it simply because of the emotion I felt coming from it... very good write.

I was happy once so long ago,
but now you're gone,
^^ simple and very effective... these were my two favorite lines.

5/5 for sure!

I really liked this poem it showed a really good flow..but I know the title is once.. but it doesn't really mean you should use it often.. the first stanza.. I think you used once three time.. not so sure.. but all together you used once like 4 or 5 time in a poem.. that way tooo much.. srry ... Im very blunt once again.. anyway good job and keep up the good work though 4/5

I can relate to this. Other than a few grammer errors I think you did a great ob 5/5