Being judges

by REL   Dec 2, 2006


Broken hearted with broken dreams

Ever things not always what it seems

shattered souls and lies unseen

yet to be touched but always redeemed

nothings enough and nothings rite always a battle always a fight

tossed to the floor no one to help me up

sick of being hurt enough is enough

i cant help that i am the way that i am

and who is to judge what i can do and what i cant

I'm not you and I'm no other person

and i cant help that I'm dying or hurting

i didn't care anymore nothing really matters

theres nothing left my heart has been shattered

one to many times and I'm so sick of hurting

but there is one thing that i do know for certain

i am who i am and theres no way I'm changing

no turning back now no more erasing

thinking waiting this race is to much I'm just pacing

didn't judge me by my walk or my clothes

I'm sick of being left left out so cold

so sick of this lying backstabbing deceiving

I've had enough of this shit man I'm done I'm leaving

because what more do u have left when all that u had has been taken

its done and I'm through man I'm so sick of waiting

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  • 16 years ago

    by Tim Mauntler

    I like the poem
    it doesn't seem forced, but there are some grammatical problems i saw like:
    "i didn't care anymore nothing really matters"
    "didn't" is past tense, "nothing really matters" is present tense
    this doesn't take away from the 5/5 from me though
    good work and keep writing
    tim

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    I like the idea of the poem, very interesting topic. You would create more powerful atmosphere with adding some more punctuation. Also, it would be easier to read if it's in stanzas. You sounded really frustrated in the end of this piece, it wasn't good like the beginning which leaves bad impression. You expressed emotions in a good way.

  • 16 years ago

    by REL

    I am hope you is too

  • 16 years ago

    by best hello hardest goodbye

    Great poem pretty sad hope your ok =(

  • 17 years ago

    by finally just me

    AY U!!!! this is on ur myspace aint it....... i love it!!!

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