I Loved A Stranger

Superb with an awsome flow. u deserve 5/5

This is really good! I loved the lines
-But love taught a hard lesson
Transition of laugh to scream-
I think that is an amazing visual. You did a great job with this. Keep it up! :)
~Midnight Sun
Btw-Thanks for the comment on my work! :)

Very sad poem of love. The imagery you have stired with your words is great.

And night comes with its dark magic
I wander like a discontent soul
Do you think it's destruction & tragic
But love should take its toll

This stanza is excellent. Great word choices.
Take Care Cindy

And night comes with its dark magic
I wander like a discontent soul
Do you think it's destruction & tragic
But love should take its toll

I like this stanza lot. Very beautiful but sad write.

Hey cool poem
nice to see that people are still working toward good poetry
if u dont mind, could u please rate and comment my new poem THE LITTLE THINGS YOU DO
ill be sure to return the favor once u comment and rate
thanksss :)