I Loved A Stranger

by Sourav   Dec 5, 2006


I loved a stranger
Strange, but I did
Now losing out my strength & power
Alone here to bleed

I gave my every emotion
Gave my every dream
But love taught a hard lesson
Transition of laugh to scream

I tried to make her happy
Wanted to make her bright
Seems I've to try for an eternity
This is just a beginning of an endless night

And night comes with its dark magic
I wander like a discontent soul
Do you think it's destruction & tragic
But love should take its toll

And I kissed a stranger
Exotic, but I did
Now losing out all my benevolence & desire
Nothing more to exceed

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  • 18 years ago

    by Fsams

    Superb with an awsome flow. u deserve 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    This is really good! I loved the lines
    -But love taught a hard lesson
    Transition of laugh to scream-
    I think that is an amazing visual. You did a great job with this. Keep it up! :)
    ~Midnight Sun
    Btw-Thanks for the comment on my work! :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Cindy

    Very sad poem of love. The imagery you have stired with your words is great.

    And night comes with its dark magic
    I wander like a discontent soul
    Do you think it's destruction & tragic
    But love should take its toll

    This stanza is excellent. Great word choices.
    Take Care Cindy

  • 18 years ago

    by chavii

    And night comes with its dark magic
    I wander like a discontent soul
    Do you think it's destruction & tragic
    But love should take its toll

    I like this stanza lot. Very beautiful but sad write.

  • 18 years ago

    by ├Truely_Spoken┤

    Hey cool poem
    nice to see that people are still working toward good poetry
    if u dont mind, could u please rate and comment my new poem THE LITTLE THINGS YOU DO
    ill be sure to return the favor once u comment and rate
    thanksss :)

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