What a wonderful write! Your work is erally good!

Wow, Great job again. I love the ideas behind your poems. 5/5

Wow.. this is amazing. i get the feeling it's not really about a doll. i love metaphors. congrats on a wonderful poem!

-Parker

Oh wow..
This was beautiful.
Really sad and heartwrenching, but a pleasure to read.
I think you did a wonderful job on this.

Wow. this poem was superb. the language you used was excellent and the ending was wonderful as well. 5/5

Nice topic. how you made the doll interwine into the poem. very clever.

5/5 David

This poem was so sad.
the imagery was good.

porcelain doll that has its wings
that sees the sky and tries to sing
relinquishing havoc among those that lost
you're bound to turn into a porcelain doll...

i just love this stanza.
very well written
best wishes
and take care.
emmeline

Wow.. Very well written S.
Beautiful!