Comments : Is forever just a word?

  • 13 years ago

    by cowgirlstar26

    I couldn't have said it better myself 5.5

  • 13 years ago

    by debbylyn

    So much coming from one so young. I like these lines:

    fooled by seven letters
    if not "love you" then "forever"
    I'd believe in forever better
    if it actually meant never

    I like your style. 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Good job. I liked the thought behind this poem
    how a word thats so profound
    can fail us so many times
    although it never makes a sound
    you'll hear the pain it chimes
    that was a great stanza!
    Nice job!
    Charisma*

  • 13 years ago

    by skye

    This is a wikid poem ..... love it love it love it!!!! keep up the awesome work! when i read it it's like reading my life!! please check out some more of my poems
    x x x skye x x x

  • 13 years ago

    by tinna

    Once again u have out done uself Mr Wild, for once i believe u have a reason to be vain.. lol
    this poem has helped me understand u better. 5/5 for this brilliant poem..

  • 13 years ago

    by Bianca

    Wow i love this one so true

  • 13 years ago

    by Chloe [*]

    Wow...

    This Poem was Very Meaningful..

    I agree with this poem very much..

    But when Love is in the air its the Best feeling.. Even If it doesnt last forever..

  • 13 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Well done, karl. I loved reading this one, it was very true, and i love your style.
    xxxxx

  • 13 years ago

    by The Undoing

    "I'd believe in forever better
    if it actually meant never"
    Amen over and over again. This was such a great piece of work... I can relate to almost everythhing you write, and you do it so well, greatly done!

    TuxxxB

  • 13 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Wow, this was simply amazing! =] Perfection and originality written all over it! The flow was good and your choice of wording was excellent!

    "I'd believe in forever better
    if it actually meant never"

    ^ My favorite lines, by far because they hold a lot of meaning behind them. =]

    Great job writing this one. 5/5 Keep it up. You've got a lot of talent as a writer and I look forward to reading more of your stuff in the future! =] Thx for the comments too, they mean a lot to me as a writer!

    Stephanie

  • 13 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Wow!
    I loved everything about this.
    it was perfect.
    A beautiful write.

  • 13 years ago

    by Bryan

    The choice of rhyme was excellent, it flowed and came together perfect, great poem karl, 5/5!!!

  • 13 years ago

    by Landi Cordier

    Hi, i like your work, youre really good!

  • 13 years ago

    by Marinell

    Nice.. you're now one of my favorite writers..

  • 13 years ago

    by *~.:LoVeLy:.~*

    Wow this was really good. U have a great writing style. 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Im In Love What Can I Say

    I didnt really understand it because im young but you knoe it sounded good so 4/5

  • 13 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    This is a really great poem, you express yourself well, however.. i disagree.. love can last forever.. be optomistic :)

  • 13 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Your poems are awesome, they speak the truth. another great 5/5.

  • 13 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    I really gave this a lot of thought while I was in never never land but a can face the reality you have expressed so well in this poem now.. BTW I like your style

  • 13 years ago

    by Tammie

    Although in parts of this I had to read it twice, it was almost like a tongue twister with the "forever never's" it was great. I agree with your words, forever has little worth these days. Good flow, meaning and concept. 5/5

    Tammie