To Get Through Life

This life is full of s/h/it
I just cant handle it
I just wana die leave this cruel and angry place
That everyone will have to face
Theres no steady pace
Its either fast or slow
High or low
You dont have anywhere to go
You have nothing to show
Except your scares to tell
All the many times you went through h.e.l.l
How nothing is well
Nothing is right
You cant even see the light
With no light you have temptations to fight
To stand up for whats right
To try and see the light
And with the shining light why do we fight?
Why cant we just stick together
And help one another
To through life. We can fight
But fight for what is right.

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