This is a great poem. I really like it because every point you made was great!! keep up the good work!
♥ Chelsea

Good words of advice but theyre all easeir said than done

I hear people tell me this all the time... its true but so over rated.

This is very sound advice delivered very eloquently. You are wise as well as talented

I like this so much. It's the greatest and most beautiful way to give a lecture (lol, it's a good thing, don't worry). It really made me think, and your words were so true. =] 5/5.

Lets just say i mite take some of this advice. It was a very well written poem.

What an inspiring message. The amount of time destined to each of us is unknown and we should make the most of it. Nice job!

That's pretty inspirational, i must say. You must of been in a good mood when you wrote this! Er, well, maybe not. I don't know. Great poem!

Parker

An excellent read. It had a nice flow, good whyming but my favourite thing about it was the advice. Great advice given in that poem. Its a very imspirtation peace of writing, which i think everyone should read, and heed the advice given. Keep up great work! xx

I love how you made every line related to life today. Very good choices of words, and great rhyming scheme. 5/5