A First Kiss

by BrokenREALiTy   Dec 8, 2006


Starting with a seductive look,
And an intimate atmosphere.
Parting your lips just a little bit,
Holding him so dear.

With a loss of breath,
Or even breathing heavily.
Your heart starts to race,
And your eyes whisper silently.

With a flick of the tongue,
Just to add a little tease.
Slowly inching forward,
About to kiss with such ease.

Your breath becoming one,
Faces just centimeters apart.
With your morals down the drain,
And desire tugging at your heart.

Welcoming his tongue,
Entwining it with yours.
Your knees shaking, weak,
Falling down to all fours.

Catching you in his arms,
Bringing you in for the kiss.
Pray to the Lord,
That neither of you miss.

Trailing your back with his fingers,
He's breathing on you.
Seducing and manipulating,
He's so good, you could sue.

Locking lips just one time,
It's so hard to breathe.
"Then don't," he whispers,
He knows just how to please.

Finally parting, breathless,
His lips, I already miss.
So this is what people talk about:
That intoxicating first kiss.
[c] 2O06 Mindy Huang

(Yes I know, most first kisses aren't like this, but hey, a girl can dream!)

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  • 17 years ago

    by Princess of snow

    Good words...I like it...

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Cute.
    Made me smile, while reading it! =]
    You dragged me in from the first stanza, wonderful job writing this one.
    Great flow and the imagery was amazing!!!
    Loved it, keep it up! 5/5

    Stephanie

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Wow!
    I loved this, it was so cute.
    My favourite part of this was the wording you used, I enjoyed it muchly.

  • 17 years ago

    by Mousie

    Haha!! well adorable poem, but honey if you're expecting THAT on your first kiss, you're going to be sooooooo let down! first kiss is awkward, a quick pec, innocent, usually not a frenchie, and giggly... trust me, it's not passionate, but they get much better as they go, don't worry!!!! cute poem 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Laurie Tran

    Damnit mindy.... you make me wanna have my first kiss real bad now.

    haha.. juss kidding. good poem.