Have (Pleiades)

by Bryan   Dec 11, 2006


Her beauty astounds me
Hard not to look, stole my
Heart and its all she took.
How she can see past my
Hurt inside and my pain,
Her beauty will stay here
Here it always remains.

Only one word is allowed in the title followed by a single seven-line stanza.The first word in each line begins with the same letter as the title.

Bryan Hunt © 2006

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  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Another good form. I do love forms. I have added you to my favorites. Good job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Anonymous Angel

    So sweet, I think your an amazing poet =) keep up the good work 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    Again, Bryan, wonderful! You are a great poet and I hope that more people come to see that. You are really good with different stlyes! =]
    loved it, loved it! Great flow!!

    ♥ Miss Ciao

  • 17 years ago

    by ashley

    This poem is really sweet

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