The Day You Left (Lanturne)

by Bryan   Dec 11, 2006


.............Tears,
...........Forming
.........In my eyes
.....The day you left
...............Me.

A Lanturne is a Japanese form of writing with the syllable flow 1.2.3.4.1.
It forms the shape of a Japanese lanturne

Bryan Hunt © 2006

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  • 18 years ago

    by Anonymous Angel

    Hey,
    I like this little poem, I tried it once but it was horrible (believe me it was awfull) ^_^
    you did a pretty good job on it though, and it shouldn't be downvoted so i give you 5/5
    kisses stephanie

  • 18 years ago

    by ashley

    Ive seen a few poems that you wrote this form of writing and its really cool

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