This I Promise You

by Bryan   Dec 12, 2006


A love like this
is hard to find,
a love like this
is one of a kind.
You're the only one
I think about,
but it killed me the
day you walked out.
Girl you know what
I say is true,
you'll never have to worry
cus this I promise you.
I'll be there to catch
you when you fall,
without your love
I cant live at all.

not finished but ill try to get some more in it, any suggestions?

Bryan Hunt © 2006

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  • 16 years ago

    by sexymama

    LET IT CUM FROM YO HEART. AND SO FAR IT'S GREAT. I CRIED WHEN I READ IT SERIOUSLY.

  • 16 years ago

    by tiffani

    AWWW! i liked this poem alot great work

  • 17 years ago

    by Curry

    Wow this is really good so far..you should definetly finish it!=] oh this is juss suggestion but maybe it would be more "proper" if you capitalized the beginning of the line on every line!=)

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Bryan,
    This is a beautiful poem. Like so many you write. So full of love. You are a very talented young man. Take it from a old lady like me. You one day will have someone to love you like you deserve to be loved. Excellent job! Take Care Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Oh, young love can be so sad. If this was inspired by your own life events, I would like to tell you that there are a million girls out there who would love such an outgoing and talented young man!

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