Underneath a Cloak of White (Etheree)

by Bryan   Dec 12, 2006


...........................Shes
..........................hidden
.......................underneath
...................a cloak of white.
.............Not knowing whats wrong,
..............not knowing what is right.
............always hidden so the world
.......can't see, hidden from her passion
...never knowing who her prince charming
could be, even though I know it should be me.
.Thoughts of him with her has taken whats left
....of my heart, tears flow down tearing me
...........apart. I pray her feelings will
.......change I always prayed they might,
..............but until then she will be
.................hidden underneath
..................a cloak of white,
.....................most lovely
........................of any
........................sights..

Etheree is a poem that consist of 10 lines with a syllable count of 1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10.

I know this is a double but i thought to give it a try.

This was written for a contest.

Bryan Hunt © 2006

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