Poison Reminds me of my friend knife

by Good Enough   Dec 12, 2006


Poison drips down my throat
Nothing can save me not even the antidote
Dying slowly inside and out
Giving up is an option there is no doubt

I'll be dead sooner then you think
Because of the poison that I drink
There is no reason for you to cry
So the tears that have fallen can dry

Life will be better without me here
So pleases don't shed a tear
Death was the answer to my life
If it doesn't work theres always the knife

the knife is an old friend of mine
It brought me happiness and sunshine
The blade let my blood shed to the floor
And then it screamed for more

Anyway I will die
And no one shall cry
no one will remember me
Because thats how I want to be

***this poem got me sent out of school and to the loony bin...

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  • 14 years ago

    by amandalynn

    Really deep.
    And really good.
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Obscura

    This is a brilliant poem the word flow easly together it had so much emotion and feeling just one thing half way through the poem it says pleases do not cry for me it should just be please but overall a fantastic poem

    well done

  • Omg so deep and lots of feelings to

  • 16 years ago

    by FridusBlueheaven

    Great job. The rhyme worked well. 5/5 no doubt!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet Disposition

    That was really good and your end message made me laugh.. i've had reactions like that lol