by Good Enough Dec 12, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
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Poison drips down my throat |
by amandalynn
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Really deep. |
by Obscura
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This is a brilliant poem the word flow easly together it had so much emotion and feeling just one thing half way through the poem it says pleases do not cry for me it should just be please but overall a fantastic poem |
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Omg so deep and lots of feelings to |
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Great job. The rhyme worked well. 5/5 no doubt!! |
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That was really good and your end message made me laugh.. i've had reactions like that lol |