Hold On Tight

by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex   Dec 12, 2006


My first attempt at a 'friendship' poem. Done for a contest... All I can say is, I tried. =]
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Stars in a sky oh so bright,
Take my hand, hold on tight
As butterflies dance along,
You will find it is here you belong.

Winds caress our smiling faces,
For souls of us move a thousand traces
Of memories and sunny days,
Touch our faces, these golden rays.

Take my hand, and hold on tight,
No longer will you alone on those nights
I'll be there to open my arms
To save you from the ways of harm.

Just remember, I'm always here,
As the moon will soon appear,
Never let go of my hand, you'll see
I'm as worthy and you and I could ever be.

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  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Good job on this poem. Glad you tried something new for that contest. Well, MY contest. lol I tried your Triquatrain. I called it Not Where I Want to Be if you wanna check it out. Thought I'd try something new too!
    Good job!
    Charisma*

  • 17 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    This is really good amd you sound like a really good friend. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Pianist

    It seemed so... forced. Sticks out against your other work as a sore thumb (That's a compliment, believe it or not).

    Answer me honestly. Did this come from your heart? Because I could not find it beating in this poem.