My Tears Are Turning Into Time

by Bryan   Dec 13, 2006


My tears are turning
into time,
pouring from my eyes
into rhymes.
Little droplets on paper
that soon fade away,
thinking of this fills
me with dismay.
As time goes on
I can still feel,
this pain is constant
and I know its real.
No matter what I do
I'm still filled with tears,
emotions unleashed
the worst of my fears.
They say to be strong
but its hard to do,
especially to give
up loving you.
The tears are taking
time away from me,
and this pain will last
for the rest of eternity.

Bryan Hunt © 2006

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  • 17 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    I think this is wonderful! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    I like this poem alot as well, there s something about your poems that grab your readers attention and they want to keep reading them, you are and amazing writer.

  • 17 years ago

    by BrixGoesxRawr

    I really really loved this. It was just amazing! WOW. I absolutley LOVED the title.. Caught me right away! One thing:

    I can can still feel,
    [Idk if you meant to put two 'can's but.. It kinda through me off]

    Other than that.. Awesome job. KEEP IT UP!

    Bri.x

  • 17 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    Comment #2:

    WOW! That was just amazing and I LOVED the title. I really love it when the title draws you in and then the poem just steals the show...great job!
    ~Midnight Sun

  • 17 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    What A Poem!!! Great job! I really really liked this one. It was filled with emotion and I know EXACTLY how you feel... just went through that myself actually. Great job, great job great job!!!

    ♥Ciao

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