Very good! I'm adding you to my favorites! You're a really great poet.. your rhymes are perfect, and you vocabulary is amazing! I like your last stanza i liked the best. Great Job!

5/5

This is a very good poem mindy, great flow, i give this poem a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

Wow.
This was very unique.
I love how you described the diary so well. Just added to the greatness of the poem.
Good flow and great vocabulary.
And can't forget, you had amazing originality!
5/5 Keep it up! =]

Stephanie

Keeping a diary easily brings us back and reminds us of past memories, good and bad. excellent write 5/5

I love this poem!
its mysterious and flows great. I've read your work before and you truly have a gift!!

I like how everything flowed and connected together. Your poetry is very well written and your language choice is swell. 5/5

I like this one 5/5

That was awesome girl. So sad but amazing. The flow was great and the whole meaning of the poem was beautiful. Keep up the great work!
God Bless deffinatly a 5/5!

~*Tay*~

Wow this is really amazing. you did such a wonderful job on it. it flowed so nicely together. the rhyming was really good except for the fourth stanza.. i dont think it rhymed to well, but other then that. great job! 5/5

~Kristina

Again, I think you did a wonderful job.
My favourite part of this was the first stanza.
I thought the imagery and wording you used in this were amazing.

Nice...

Really good!
5/5
;) I liked a lot!
Keep writing ;)
and by the way Merry Christmas and a Happy new year

Wow. great poem.

Still really good but it didnt hit me like got cheated, the detail and imagery is flawless though

I liked that one, it was good, higher level than i would expect from someone your age... nice job, very nicely written! 5/5