That was awwsome.I loved it.

I want to say wow, Its a great poem.

Laurie

I really like the theme of this poem because I do believe it is shallow to only look at the surface. My favorite line is "Playing darts in the dark" I was always told if I was interested in finding a companion to find someone that loves me for me. It is painful when you think someone has discovered you only to find out they are shallow

I liked it a lot, I too hate shallowness in a person. It is so rare and beautiful to find a person who is for real. all the way to the heart. good job.

Ugh. i hate thouse guys who are like that. their lies, drive me crazy. and sometimes you cant tell who they are. 5/5 i loved it.

I like this poem. I like the fact that in the end the girl looks how the guy would like her to but she doesn't want him anymore. Beauty is only skin deep. 5/5