Started With A Kiss

by Timmmyy   Dec 15, 2006


It started with a kiss
it ended with a heartbreak
with all this shit combined
i felt like i was about to die
talking to a friend
i started to sniff and cry
letting all my emotions out to her
she made me feel better
like a bird flying free from all the drama
but why did he let it end?
now hes not even a friend
all was going smoothly
until he one day told me he didnt love me anymore
my world collasped
now i feel all this sore that i endure
would this go on forever more?

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  • 16 years ago

    by Tara

    Great poem, like people said before maybe a bit more stucture but still fantastic!
    ---tara

  • 17 years ago

    by Pia

    This one's great. And you're only 13! I'm impressed!

  • 17 years ago

    by homebound

    Great job...I agree with lina please comment bak if u hav time! :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Never URs

    Will you please comment on my poems?

  • 17 years ago

    by Never URs

    This poem could use a little more structure, but it was great i lo ve reading your work and i have you on my favorites list :)