More than just another reason

by Allykins   Dec 16, 2006


One cut, two cuts,
another makes three.
but all the baindaids in the world
couldn't fix me...
I'm not depressed!
and I don't hate my life!
I'm being honest
when I say, "I'm fine."
it's not a problem
it's not a disease
it's way more than just a reason
for you to look down on me.

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  • 18 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    There's something about the corniness in this poem that oddly brings it together and makes it worth a 5. I liked it, and it's not really my type... huh... good poem... Nice rhyming scheme, short, to thepoint.
    Nice job
    try to avoid choppy lines that don't have
    "..."
    or
    "--","-"
    in front of it.
    5/5
    ~Stevie

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