by senlly Dec 16, 2006
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
If you want to discover new Oceans |
by *Charisma*
I really liked this poem especially your first two lines. If you want to accomplish some things, you may have to leave your fears behind....I think that your line about the weird didn't seem as deep as the rest of your poem, but it did make me smile. So good job! It was a brilliant write! |