Where did it all go

by Raine   Dec 17, 2006


Trying to pull myself together
After you ripped my heart in two
Hurting me like you did was the worst you could do
Laying it down like you did
Was slowly eating me away
Wanting to slip into the floor
Wishing it was yesterday
So i wont have to hate you
So i wont have to wipe the tears out of my eyes
Why couldn't you be like everyone else
Why didn't you just lie
The truth was to strong
You had to be wrong
I shouldn't had heard it
So i wont have to care but your to hard to forget
When you was always there
Now you cant look into my eyes
Or even come close to me
This is just not how its suppose to be
But you want it this way
you don't want to stay
Or work it out to make it better for us
Now that you lost my trust
I have to leave the one i love with everything i had
Please I'm beyond pissed I'm beyond hurt
You killed me when i found out i was no longer your first

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  • 16 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    I really liked this poem. It was sad and very I could relate to it a lot. I'm sure most people could relate. There were only a few grammar mistakes I saw. The i's need to be capitalized.

    So i wont have to hate you
    So i wont have to wipe the tears out of my eyes
    ^^Wont I think should be wouldn't.

    The truth was to strong
    ^^To should be too.

    I shouldn't had heard it
    ^^Had should be have.

    So i wont have to care but your to hard to forget
    ^^Wont should be wouldn't.

    When you was always there
    ^^Was should be were.

    Now that you lost my trust
    ^^I'm not sure if this should be: "Now you've lost my trust." or "Now that you've lost my trust."

    Sorry if I was a little too picky. I'm pretty much a grammar freak. I really did like your poem though! Oh and thanks so much for commenting on my poem "Live Life At Random". :]

    Keep writing!
    Cayce

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